Poem: Where's Your Innocence Now?
She's missing something,
Something she didn't notice,
But she feels its absence.
The absence of innocence in her mind,
Her mind which was purer than fresh spring water,
Her mind which was happier than a unicorn,
And now it's the saddest of them all.
Every corner of her mind,
There's nowhere she can escape,
Every corner filled with more emotion,
Yet she's missing her emotion,
She's missing her emotion.
Desolation,
Isolation,
Despair,
Despair in every corner,
Filling every inch,
If she can't feel safe in her mind,
Where can she feel safe?
Despair filling her like a lead balloon.
She was whiter than a dove,
Purer than a lily,
But that lily has wilted,
She's the blackest raven now.
Traces of happiness here and there,
But everywhere she turns, there's more despair,
Will she ever escape this despair?
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5 Comments – Postiwch sylw
tommy b
Rhoddwyd sylw 20 mis yn ôl - 18th September 2010 - 12:11pm
very dark and very good indeed
nice work :D
Sambow
Rhoddwyd sylw 20 mis yn ôl - 18th September 2010 - 13:03pm
"Her mind which was happier than a unicorn,"
I love that line :)
Great poem, and very relative to our generation- as sad as that may be. One of your best poems, well done!
Stormer007
Rhoddwyd sylw 20 mis yn ôl - 19th September 2010 - 01:05am
I love it.
gumdropgirl
Rhoddwyd sylw 20 mis yn ôl - 20th September 2010 - 17:47pm
strange but meaningfull
DeadAngelLover22
Rhoddwyd sylw 16 mis yn ôl - 18th January 2011 - 10:05am
Very strong peice, brilliant work