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Free To Be Me?

Posted by emb789 from Cardiff - Published on 27/09/2010 at 09:24
2 comments » - Tagged as Creative Writing

  • Freedom

This has been entered into the Free To Be Me competition.

I'm rather lucky, you know,
'Cause I am free to be me.
But I don't know yet who I am,
So how can I be free?

I keep searching for answers,
But I can't find the truth,
Because I've buried myself,
And I'm in too deep to be free.

I've locked myself away,
I'm trapped within my memories,
I can't escape until I forget,
So I don't think I can be free.

I don't want to forget,
But I want to be free,
If you could unlock the cage,
Could I end up free?

You are going to free me.
I've handed over the key,
I've shared that key with many,
But they haven't freed me yet.

Maybe you're the exception?
Maybe you can solve the lock?
All I know is that you're the one,
Who'll teach me to be free.

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2 CommentsPost a comment

Stormer007

Stormer007

Commented 20 months ago - 27th September 2010 - 18:20pm

I really like this :)
It's sort of there, but not and really good but mysterious all at the same time. Sorry, thats a really bad review :P But still, I like it :D

Winst_one

Commented 19 months ago - 4th October 2010 - 13:51pm

That is wicked

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