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Poem: Indecisive

Posted by emb789 from Cardiff - Published on 29/06/2010 at 10:58
5 comments » - Tagged as Creative Writing

  • Which way?

I'm happier alone,
But I never want to die alone.

When I'm with friends I want solitude
When I have solitude I want my friends

Things society forbids fascinate me
But I'm too scared of prison

I'm law abiding
But I want to experiment.

I don't like love
But if it were you, I wouldn't mind

I'm indecisive
But I know what I want

I want you.
Always you.
Vague, indecisive, infuriating
You.
Always you,
Only you,
Please say it's only me?

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5 CommentsPost a comment

Sambow

Sambow

Commented 19 months ago - 30th June 2010 - 18:22pm

Awesome poem :)
I love the listing at the beginning, especially the line:
"Things society forbids fascinate me
But I'm too scared of prison" Genius, love it! :D

RoLouG

RoLouG

Commented 19 months ago - 7th July 2010 - 21:33pm

awww that is so sweet :)
i sooo get what you mean "When I'm with friends I want solitude
When I have solitude I want my friends"
so good

london-decent(L)

london-decent(L)

Commented 18 months ago - 20th July 2010 - 19:07pm

wow, i love that! I totally agree, that is my type of poem! x

fattigalupo333

fattigalupo333

Commented 18 months ago - 5th August 2010 - 11:09am

Nice i really like this poem. I feel like that a lot of the time. I change my mind at the drop of a hat!

Stormer007

Stormer007

Commented 18 months ago - 16th August 2010 - 00:17am

That poem is AWESOME :P like really good. I really like it :D

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